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for A Proper Valentines' Day

by RyuaAlba

schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello it's me yet again... Sorry to be commenting all the time, I thought it was only fair!

Another smoking hot chapter! Smoking.... burning... fiery.. yummy chapter. Liking the naughtier side come out. I wonder if there will be a chapter in the dorms.
person z
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, this was hot! more chapters, please! The library scene was my favorite.
person Ashley Snape
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Pokes Back* Yeah i'm old enough and i like how Ginny got into the pickture, although i might have to read it again, its 9 in the morning on my spare and i though i should read this while i had the chance. Anyways, i have a request since i'm not at all to write something like this i was wondering if you could do something involving My Char? Just a request, i though it would be fun. Anyways, Can't wait for the next Chapter
person Khaleda
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy freaking hell, you updated. *big grin* And might I say, that was worth the wait. Damn. Damn... I wish that sort of thing would happen to me. *ponders thoughtfully for a moment* I love Ryua, absolutely adore her with Hermoine, and eagerly await your next chapter. Great job, as usual. Just, ah... don't keep me waiting, lest I leave you several more impatient reviews... *grins*

~Khaleda
person pfeil
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always love Hr in the library ;)
person ecila
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you updated this! I had almost forgotten all about it so I went and re-read it. And I just have to say that I love this story. Lots of hot sex, and you have managed to get all the infrastructure around it. So many stories lack that, it's just strait to the sex and it kinda gets boring after the first sex scene. But your's doesn't :)
I simply loved the scene were Ryua stole Hermione's panties! And the scene with Ginny was really good. And Hermione.. oh... she and Ryua ganging up on Ginny :D
person Cod
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eheh - I went to check the site after quite a long while, and idly wondered if this fic was updated :P Lo and behold, it is. Awesome chapter. XD
I hadn't really suspected it to be Ginny.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey great story, mabe you could, not nessesarily now but later on, have the other girls use a dildo on Ginny as you said she likes to have sex too. mabe a strap on... ====> ;>==
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok firstly wow. it's hard to find a sceen like that ANYWHERE!! Somehow i think the next instalment will be most enjoyable. and do i sense the slightest hint of a plot?

please dont keep me hanging on this one

lycanthrope
person Meep
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just finished reading it, and um... wow. Hope you continue this. :)