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for A Proper Valentines' Day

by RyuaAlba

schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was hot. *Squirms uncomfortably*. Bravo. Maybe Hermione should steal some of Ryuo's (?) clothing ;D. If you haven't done this yet some clit on clit action, some 69, and/or strap-on or vibrator action would be scorching. Are you gay/bi or are you one of those straight girls(?) who write good femmeslash? Just wondering...Peace.
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One word: Bondage. Yummy. I wonder who that could be? Peace.
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Good threesome. *Drools*. Peace.
person RavenTiger
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should update soon. It was a really hot read.
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, its interesting and it grabs your attention. I wonder...Are you done with it? Because if you are then thats' a shame.
person oh my
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Best. femslash. EVER!
person golock
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read the story up t the latest at this time and I am very interested in it, Please, continue your work
*Salute*
person Qestral
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love a bit of femmeslash every once in a while.

Your last update was a while ago; are you still planning to continue this story?
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
English here, so keep that 'u' in favourite!

I am really enjoying this series so far. I like how you describe each scene, it's not er, to coin a phrase: wham bam thank you ma'am.
It's all lead up to properly and carried out with a sexy style that shows Hermione's resistance slowly crumbling away, instead of what you see sometimes when she is all needy. I like this Hermione more.

Long may it continue!

I am off to read the next chapter!
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fans self*

That was sexy! I wasn't expecting that, a very pleasant surprise!

Got me started now, need more slash... *zombified*