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Well, this is kinda awesome...not your average smut fic, I love the characters! please keep writing!

I was on here looking for a story to read and I came across yours. I got to tell you I loved this story. You are a talented writer and I hope you post more in the future. :)

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Story: A Proper Valentine's Day
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Hello! It is the very cool story! I like it very much.
I don't like stories with characters who are not in the book. But this one surpassed all my expectations. And the seventh chapter so exciting!
Thanks for writing this story!

This is one of the best stories I've read on here in a long long time.

I think you've managed to get Hermione's character almost dead on, it isn't always easy to take someone else's character and write them totally believably but I think you've done a very good job here.

Ryua is a very interesting and fun character, a refreshing change from the Sue OCs who pop up so often; she's well constructed, complex, her portrayal is consistent throughout, and her sporty but smart and more assertive personality forms an interesting but believable dynamic with her more reserved book-worm of a girlfriend.

I would love to see you add to this, and especially add more soft bondage scenes to it. I thought the one scene you've done so far, and the earlier thoughts about bondage from Ryua, has been great. It clearly demonstrates that Ryua wants to tie Hermione up, and presumably very thoroughly, but loves her enough that she wants Hermione to like it too and so she keeps it gentle, sexy and fun at the start so as to not scare her off. Really want to see that continue.

So in summary, please continue with this and let Ryua get Hermione tied up some more.

I love this story, it's the second time or third not sure that i've read it. I love Hermonie but hate Ginny lol But the threesome was well written and worked well, but don't let ginny ruin it lol!

awe..some.
yuri all the way, valentiens day rump, a hot study sesion, hermione getting ambused after Quidditch then takeing over and makeing karen go flying, liabary sex, hermiones first time going at it herself(?? didnt she go at the Quidditch pitch?), a very hot bath and finally a even better desturbance:D
what is comming up next?

I need to go change my panties. I loved their little study session. I think Hermione learned a thing or two. ;D I am also Canadian. LOL Peace.

I will never look at a quidditch stadium in the same way again. *Crosses legs*. Peace.

One of my fantasies is having sex in a public library. *Goes and takes a cold shower*. Good story so far. Peace.