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for Daddy, Teach Me

by Confessionssmut

person Elric Maxwell
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I simply MUST bow to the greatness of your dirty,dirty mind! I am loving your fics!!! *bows in greatfulness* I am enjoying your HP fics! EM
person Elric Maxwell
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and ignore what Mew's saying...even you said so yourself that the sex portrayed was unbelieveable! But I can't get over how cute, yet horny you made Draco! I know you're ignoring what that igg'nant child is saying... EM
person Child of the Darkened moon
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O W-well that was certainly... something.
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mew- how was Draco acting sixteen? And he's saying penis because he's eleven. It's supposed to be more real, not sexy. (Though it is :D)

I love this fic! I've read it a couple times and I can't believe I haven't reviewed yet. I swear, I thought I had *hides*. You had me smiling at how cute Draco was or what Lucius was thinking, but at the same time, it was really erotic. I agree with one of the other reviewers; I kept thinking Draco was six, not eleven (I'm not complaining, I'm just saying...). Whereas Mew thought he was sixteen *looks confused*. :D GREAT FIC
person Jeni-chan
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ugh...Wow...THAT was good. He seemed so innocent for 11, lol. I kept imagining him being six or something! But I loved it!!! Hot..so hot
person dfegdfg
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Hot
person Ms. Ichigo
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story so much i think you should do more.
person Mew
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually some of it was good but I found most of it cheesy and not even close to believable. Especially the last chapter and Draco's reactions. He is eleven not sixteen. Then again it is my opinion. I certainly wouldn't reccommend or read it twice. Get a beta and change your words. Penis is not sexy.

-disgusted-
person Tismine
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
JESUS you're a fucking good writer!
person Anon
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've never been so horny in my life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!