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January 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it is one of hottest ones I have rad
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was unbelievably hot. Like I-had-to-change-my-underwear-after-reading-it hot.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! great story, I will say you coined my favorite quote of all time: "Daddy, your butt is eating my arm." "Daddy's butt likes the taste of your arm." I laughed so loud at that one! But really, you should make an epilogue to the epilogue... that story is too damn good to end.
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Lucius teaching his naughty little boy about the joy of sex is the ultimate CLASSIC. Loved it, kudos!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT hot? Hot!!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was reading this all sensibly, thinking 'hmm yes, this author has a good grasp of grammar and I like her sexy twisted papa malfoy'... and then this line happened.
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good gods...that was hot! I very much enjoyed it *winks*
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was disturbing on many levels but for some reason I loved it! Seriously I laughed so hard I almost fell out of my chair! I'm pretty sure I was blushing like a stop sign too but whatever lol. Great job! hehe :D
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This really was a very lovely story. I think you did a wonderful job having Draco sound young; it really does seem like he's just discovering his body. Awesome job.... I don't even really like this pairing much, but I'd definately rec your fic.
As a side note, I want to respond to Mew's rather rude review-
The use of 'penis' in this fic, rather than 'cock' or 'dick' isn't supposed to be sexy, but (I'm assuming) was intended to convey innocence. It also does well for the slightly classroom feel of the fic.... I mean, if Lucius is teaching Draco about sex, it makes sense that they'd say words like 'penis' and 'anus'... I don't remember my sex-ed teacher in highschool saying thins like 'cock' and 'dick.' It just means that the author has good tone and diction, not that he/she does not know how to write good smut. So shut up.
Well anyway... I'm off to read more of your fics, since I've fallen in love with your writing style.
-PBM
As a side note, I want to respond to Mew's rather rude review-
The use of 'penis' in this fic, rather than 'cock' or 'dick' isn't supposed to be sexy, but (I'm assuming) was intended to convey innocence. It also does well for the slightly classroom feel of the fic.... I mean, if Lucius is teaching Draco about sex, it makes sense that they'd say words like 'penis' and 'anus'... I don't remember my sex-ed teacher in highschool saying thins like 'cock' and 'dick.' It just means that the author has good tone and diction, not that he/she does not know how to write good smut. So shut up.
Well anyway... I'm off to read more of your fics, since I've fallen in love with your writing style.
-PBM
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all i have 2 say was THAT WAS HOT!