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for The Friday Boy

by harriet

person Lee
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
W
person Lioncourt
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, angsty and captivating. Just the way I like it. And no, 5 chapters is not enough I\'m afraid. (Update!)
person vampchic
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was just a mean place to leave that! You had better update soon! I need to know what happens next. And it seems to me that Harry\'s jealousy isn\'t entirely unfounded. I have the slight impression though that Dumbledore put Bill up to it to break the two appart. *Shrugs* It at least seems like a thing he would do. And if Harry\'s seeing Snape\'s nightmares as part of the bond they\'re forming, what\'s happening to Snape? Seriously cant wait for the next update. I\'m really loving this fic.
person Sophia
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can definitely tell Bill Weasley\'s a \'bastard in the making,\' lol. I really want everything to work out well for Harry and Severus and now Bill is pissing me off. I hope that Harry and Severus really do love one another. Keep up the very good work and this was an excellent set of chapters you put out.~Sophia
person Rabekka
schedule May 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thoses are all great chapters! I can\'t wait for more..
person canis_major
schedule May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am just loving this story!! Please please please could you post your other stories \'cos I love them soooooooo much.
person Kateri
schedule May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this is a most interesting story so far. Really looking forward to more
person glowing_haven
schedule May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG...I don\'t have internet access for one week and when I get back there\'s sooooooooooooo much to read...
And sooooooooooooo much great stuff to read...
When are you updating again??????? Even though I just read about ten chapters I think I\'m already on withdrawl...
So PLEASE update very, very soon??????
person antipyro
schedule May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew!!! Finally caught up to you.

I always love the exquisite detail you go into in explaining exactly what the characters are thinking, doing and their surroundings. It\'s what makes you a great writer, as I\'m sure most of your readers will attest to. That and the drool-worthy smut you write.....Well, what can I say????..... O.k.... Beautiful, glorious, mind numbing, and generally very, very good. How you manage to out-do yourself every time is a complete mystery, and I\'m thinking your best playing card.

Hope you\'re finished watching that series you got and are getting down to writing more. The scene with Draco and Severus sent shivers up my spine....I hope he\'s good at glamours or concealment charms.

....and another great thing is the realism you give your stories. Most writers will indicate a spell to \'clean up\' afterwards; you just \'grab a dusty rag\' and wipe off clean. Love it all.

Much candy and good feelings to your muse.
person vampchic
schedule May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yum! Very delicious chaps there, but poor Harry, he\'s in pain. Snape should kiss it and make it feel better lol. And Draco seriously needs to be more careful about what he wishes for. Maybe now he\'ll leave Harry alone. Seriously loving this fic, cant wait for the next update!