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Freaking fantastic! I actually started this story right before my last finals week of college. It about killed me to stop reading and study. I loved every minute of it. The ending blew my mind. It was different from anything I

I love ur work just love it

So I'm on chapter 3, your grammar is really lacking (I can't stand it when people don't use commas in the right places, instead just having long, continios sentences!), but the plot is good so I'm keeping with it for now.

A few examples -

Kinda disturbing that, even though we know the reasons for Snape going to the club on Fridays, no one seems to have a problem with the fact that boys as young as 14 are being provided for him to "deflower" every week. It's like sex trafficking and I'm shocked that it's seen as OK because Snape needs the memories. Who the hell in their right mind would overlook something like that? And Snape being sexually attracted to Harry since Harry was 11...and Dumbledore doesn't see a problem with that? I don't mind chan in fics as long as they are over a certain age, but I can't see the characters reacting the way you have made them.

A lot of people talk about how this fic is one of the best and so on. Personally, I can't see it and I'm sure many of the weel-known Authors in the HP fandom would very much agree. I can only asume the people who think this fic is great are people who are easily satisfied and haven't read any of the greats our there in the fandom. Your grammar really is terrible, you know. But alas, I'm still reading...

LOVED this story - TOTALLY - however, I was momentarily taken aback by what Harry chose to name his son... seems to me that would be a reminder of a BAD/negative aspect, and to have his son grow up to be just like that would seem, to me, NOT something that a parent would want for their child... but again, the story TOTALLY blew me away! Thanks!

I'm only on chapter 16 but I am LOVING this story - wonderfully done!! I can't help, though, but wonder why Draco Malfoy, rich as he is, is selling porno... he doesn't need the money, so why bother? Hmmm.

Thanks for a very well written plot - I'm getting back to it right now!

this was undoubtedly one of the best snarry stories i have read to date.
just the right amount of deceit, angst, smex and love.
your plot twists were ingeniously thought out and you stuck to character very well.
i don't think i have any words that can accurately describe how much i loved this but let me just say that i hope you never quit writing because you have been given an unimaginable gift for words.

I'm sorry, your last chapter said you WEREN'T predictable...

OK so i didn't see this one coming. It's so obvious, how'd i miss it?