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for The Friday Boy

by harriet

person Jesse
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have just read all your Snarry fics over these couple of weeks. You are just Brilliant! I would say your my fave author ^_^ I love all your stories, but i think this one is my favourite. Please keep your stories coming! I would love to read more of your work. Hey, could we have a little sequel to The Friday Boy or something? To see whats going on with the 'new snape' and Harry and the baby? hehe Good Work!
person Dingo Ate My Baby
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! what an amazing story, I love all of your stories so much, and Friday Boy has to be one of my favorties. I can't wait for your next story, and I really hope its Snarry again because you definitely know how to write SS/HP well. Very well. Extremely well!!! Keep up the great work Riffraff.
person emma
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for wrighting this one!!!!
i LOVED it
i wish there was more but it ended good!!!
once again THANK YOU!!!
person Kakasmai
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Raises a hand* I am one of the guilty ones that hasn't reviewed at all yet, but also have been religiously reading. LOL! Please don't send the puppy. I like my ankles without holes, ty! :P!
Anyway, I wanted to say I enjoyed your fic overall, there were parts I didn't like as well, but only because I feared it was going to become one of those fics that fail to have a happy ending. You kept it dark enough to make one almost believe there was going to be no hope for our Snape and Harry, but then you would bring the mood back up -- or make Harry more stubborn -- so the happy ending was still a possiblity. You kept me on my toes!
Your Harry and Snape I thought were well characterized and I loved how you exposed their flaws and let them deal with the consequences of having the said flaws.
Now as much as I loved the story, the ending was kinda aburpt. I totally didn't expect it -- and that may have been your attempt -- but it was welcomed. We did get the happy ending even though it was random -- as Harry and his power often is -- but it worked. And I like the idea of Harry being thrown into the Without-Voldemort-World and having to deal with the changes this new world would have -- mainly the changes it would have on one certain professor . . .
Anyway, congrats of finishing the fic and may I suggest a small, one part sequel just to wrap things up. Ya know, a lil lemon while exploring this Without-Voldemort-World. ^_~!
person Aisling
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG *huggles* that was the CUTEST harry/snape I think I've ever read! At first I wasn't sure I liked your writing style, but it few on me, and I'm SOOOOO glad I read it. I can't wait to read more of your work. Normally I would have ended the fanfic at the mere mention of Ginny touching Snape's Harry.. but for some reason, you made me keep reading. I love it! Thank you! I spent 9 hours on Tuesday reading the entire thing. I finally finished it at 3am. I'm going to be so dead for work.. but it was unbelieveably worth it! I can't wait to read the rest of your stories... I wonder if i can work a competent 8 hr shift w/o sleeping for 48 hrs... hmm. If only I had a desk job with a computer. But, I suppose reading fanfic at work would be a very BAD idea.. especially since I cried just a lil when Snape exploded and hit Harry.. Okay, I'm babbling... anyway, thank you SOO much!! The story was wonderful!

Aisling
person Gravy Baby
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simply wonderful! I have sooo enjoyed this story and can't wait to read more from you. I love the plot twists you sneaky little bugger! ^_^
person Aihythil
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant!!!! I absolutely adore your work! I really hope you will continue to write Harry/Snape fanfic! This site would be lost without your input! ;)
person WitchbladeHell
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, okay, I haven't reviewed this story yet (I'm pretty sure), I'm guilty! But I've been reading it almost since it started, which was difficult when the changes to this site started.

This story rocks. I wasn't sure about halfway through if I would like the way it was going, but it turned out very well and you are an awesome writter! I hope you do more Harry/Snape pairings!

Thank you!
person Rosencrantz
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
erm... *quickly draws legs onto chair to be safe from the dog* Oh wait... it was an imaginary dog. In that case the imaginary Snape in my head can vivisect it.
I only discovered your story yesterday and it took me some time to read it but ince I had started I couldn't stop. The characters were well drawn and I especially liked your Snape. The idea with the severance potion was great. Okay... I think I'd be re
person SweeetAsheyPie
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was soo good! Sequel?? Please :) I love how you named the kid Friday. It kind of brings the story full circle. Great job!