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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is a good story so far. You need to get a beta or read it over before you post your story though. You have some mistakes that should not be there. Such as when Albus is telling Harry to have a "Save" trip insted of a "safe" trip. In my own writing I do the same thing so when I catch it in others writings I like to point it out. Because I like it when other point out my little mistakes too. I will keep reading your story. Best of luck to you in writing this fan fic.
Miki
Miki
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story even if Sev's a bit OOC but then again he and Harry are friends here now. I cant wait to see what Hermione, Draco and the Weasley family are going to do to get Harry and SEverus together. Update as soon as you can
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. More Please.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! Please update soon. WOW!!!!
K
K
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's quite nice, but would be even more so if you find a beta.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter 2 and all I can say is...Noooooo!!!! You can't stop there! *pout* Great story please continue ASAP.
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can we have more of this now?
Please...
Please...
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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking the story so far. Hope you have a good trip and come back with lots of interesting ideas! ^_^
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April 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, I love it, bye