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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so cute this story is coming along nicely i hope for updated soon
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!! let me know when you update please!!!!!!!!!!
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww this is awesome i want the pen friends to final get to meet each other!!
Fantastic story keep it up!
Fantastic story keep it up!
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Ron's pregnant right? I hope so.^^
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I love it!! Please continue to write more, I can't wait to see what happens after chapter 3, with the bonding ceremony and Harry and Sev meeting for the first time in three years!! Aahh, I'm soooo excited, please update again soon!!
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I really want to see how Harry and Severus relationship develops. Please please please update soon!!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A really fine story, but You have a serious problem with tenses! I'm really sorry to say it this way, but have You ever HEARD of past tense? Past perfect, for example? I sugest a beta. You really need it. Even people whose mother language is english have them. Why post something that has good content but is unreadable becouse of spelling and grammar? Still, the story is quite good. You should continue.
Sincerely,
CV
Sincerely,
CV
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaww blody hell Severus is just as oblivious as Harry. You have got to update this, this is brilliant. Poor Roniekins.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! Can't wait to see the next chapter soon!