rate_review Reviews

Get a Beta.....FAST. If you have a Beta, get a better one. The grammar in this and several other chapters is horrifying. Now perfection is not needed in fanfiction, but the readers should not have to wrinkle their brow to understand the dialouge. Spelling could use a lot of work as well. Go on the Portkey Forums and go to the Beta request forums, there are a ton there that can help you with this.

That aside, this story is by far the most original I have seen in a long time. Most stories would have been over and done with, with a predictable plot. Good for you. The Weasley\'s catching the sex? Priceless. Harry\'s jealousy at Remus...even better. Keep the creativity flowing. Just get someone to nitpick and correct you work and it will be a Masterpiece.

Wow! Cool chapter! I just know you wouldn\'t kill Hermione... hehe :) I also like the plot on Snape.. Cheers! =)

heym great story. I loved how you tied in all the loose pieces. Wow. It is how I would like the seventh book to go. I relize that Harry has not defeated Tom yet. I hope there is an epilogue to go with this or MORE MORe more PLEASE! You are a talented writer and I hope you keep it up. I knew Snape wasn\'t so evil!

Sorry, but this story is much to confusing. Why is Hermione dying? There is so much in this story that I don\'t understand. The way your characters are acting is unnatural. Maybe it\'s just me, but I hope not.

Very good story! Can\'t wait to see what will happen!
I hope ,now, that Harry ans Hermione will be okay...