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Hello Happily Jaded,

I'm trying to get in contact with you about your Beta services for a new story I'm working on....let me know how to hit you up. I saw you offering a few weeks back, but you've removed that post, so I'm wondering if you're still available. You can contact me at SouthernNYCgal@aol.com. Thanks.

Soft

Wow, I absolutely love your story, your writing technique, everything about it.
Thank you so much for writing the Epilogue, the romantic in me was screaming for closure and you ended it very well!!

First off, very enjoyable story, I read it all through in one sitting...again. Secondly, what happened between Hermione and Harry? Did they reconcile or shall I leave that up to my imagination? Are you going to write the second epilogue that you hinted to when you initially finished the story (yes, I do sometimes read the ending before the beginning, but I KNEW I had read it before!)? Finally, thanks for finishing it!

it was really really good. really well written and i just want to as that you got some real talent. i almost forgot that this wasn't a book written by a re Great job!!al author (unless you are) but anyway really well done. out of 10 it was 100. you should write another story. Great job!!

one of the best fics ever. i'm not good at giving praises, but you'll know i'm not easy to even give one. beautifully writtem...bla-bla-bla *standard compliments*, really, i couldn't do you justice with words. but, i feel this story. i really do

Hi, I've never reviewed one of these before now, so I'm not sure what exactly to say.

I really enjoyed the humor and the sexual tension between the characters that you created. You made Draco's & Hermoine's personalities deeper but still true. I liked that Draco didn't get sappy in his emotion. I don't think J.K. Rowlings' Draco would get sappy if he were actually able to love, so how you wrote his emotions was great. I also think you were spot on with his quiet resignation to what had to happen when they were found out. And I can actually see Hermoine go into a "tizzy" over this awakening, she's so wound up with school, etc.

Very amusing, thanks for writing it!

Jan

I really really wish you wouldn't give up draco-hermione, this story was def. one of the best ones out there. New stuff is very possible...it just takes creativity and thought. but i respect your decision, if you don't feel it then your writing will reflect it. I liked the epilogue! Looking forward to the second one....

great story but i too thought it was screaming for an epilogue or a sequal

The prospect of an alternate ending is daunting. The ending itself was a total damper--this epilogue made up for it! PUHLEEEESE quit the angst!

nice!!