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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I found this to be an excellent story! I wish there were some elaboration about Hermione getting a taste of dark arts. I feel it'll challenge her, and also brings the two closer together.
Thank you.
Thank you.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing story, though I thought the ending came on to fast. The story was so well written and the relationship between Hermione and Severus was truly beautiful. Yes I too shed a few tears while reading Chapter 5.
I do believe that a truly gifted author allows the reader to experience feelings the characters themselves feel.
I do hope you will do the sequel. Please try and let me know if you do as I'd really like to see where this will take them.
Many thanks for a great piece.
Linda
Passionate4Snape
I do believe that a truly gifted author allows the reader to experience feelings the characters themselves feel.
I do hope you will do the sequel. Please try and let me know if you do as I'd really like to see where this will take them.
Many thanks for a great piece.
Linda
Passionate4Snape
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This certainly has great potential for an excellent story. There are a few spelling errors but hey this is your first fic and we all make mistakes yeah? You have a good writing style and I like your dialogue too, it flows and makes for easy reading. Maybe you could have spent a little more time on developing the relationship between your 2 main characters but I still love what I\'ve read! All I need now is for MORE!!!!! LOL and Blessings Amethystique xx ; )x
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May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write more please. I really like this story.
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April 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Can\'t wait to read more! :)
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April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start to this story. I hope Severus and Remus are friendly enough now so they don\'t make Hermione\'s visit more difficult. More story please.
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April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this.
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April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You said this is your first story???????? Could\'ve fooled me...no seriously I think it\'s a very good start and would love to see where you\'re taking it. So there\'s no need for insecurities.
If you still search for a beta you can mail me...I would love to try it...and if you don\'t then just some advice...don\'t worry nothing bad :-)
You should just watch out for some of your sentences getting too long...mostly it\'s great written but sometimes the sentences are so long that it\'s hard to remember the beginning. Second and last from me...re-read your chapters very carefully...it would be best to re-read them after a break of uh maybe an hour or so...you see minor faults (mostly there because of fast typing) better because you don\'t read what you think that you wrote down, but what you really wrote...did that make sense to you??????
Well I\'m looking forward to your next (and hopefully soon) update.
If you still search for a beta you can mail me...I would love to try it...and if you don\'t then just some advice...don\'t worry nothing bad :-)
You should just watch out for some of your sentences getting too long...mostly it\'s great written but sometimes the sentences are so long that it\'s hard to remember the beginning. Second and last from me...re-read your chapters very carefully...it would be best to re-read them after a break of uh maybe an hour or so...you see minor faults (mostly there because of fast typing) better because you don\'t read what you think that you wrote down, but what you really wrote...did that make sense to you??????
Well I\'m looking forward to your next (and hopefully soon) update.