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for Dangerous Manipulation

by shtoofimarie57

schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You\'re evil ! Poor Ryry... or it is poor Sevy ? XD
But I really like your story ! Want more of it !
Can\'t wait to see the next chapter... Hope you will update soon !!! ^^
person rah
schedule May 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! When are you going to update?
Please update soon!?! Your story is exactly what
I was looking for today! Thanks for the lift!
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I think
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~rah~
person naz
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh mi gdo so angsty, i can\'t wait for more, i really wanna see what happens back at hogwarts,
person Isis
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO you can\'t stop there the was just pure evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO BE A MORRON TO THINK THAT THIS STORY IS NOT WORTH WRITING!!!!! I love it but i have one complaint. YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE AND MORE OFTEN!!!
person Night Shade
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous!! I was too enthralled to review the first chapter, so here it is now. I like how long the chapters are, and this is such a good written fic. Please update soon. I think this is going to be one of my favourite fics.
person pheonixelemental
schedule May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO Sevie!!! i want the bonding scene if it\'s good. otherwise just summarize. *grins* behind every great man is a better woman. einsteins wife did a lot of his work, but didn\'t get compinsation. anyway can\'t wait of for more ttyl
person Malicena
schedule May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful I love it! You\'re definitly not! wasting your time writing this story.. =D
person glowing_haven
schedule May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t even think that you\'re wasting your time with this story. It\'s great and I really hope for another update very soon. As for the bonding ceremony...hmmm...I guess it\'s way more interesting what\'ll happen afterwards unless of course there\'s something special happening during the ceremony.
So please update very soon.
person momoko
schedule May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, bye
person fay_black
schedule May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great story and that you should keep writing.
Tough for your safety you should put a discaimer at the begining of at least the first chapter.