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**pouts** But I like the fluffy Snape! I hope he doesn't learn to fight the urge to much, at least! Looking forward to more!

I really enjoyed reading everything you've written so far. I adore forced bonding and Mpreg in Snarry fics, and you've made them both work wonderfully!!! I'd love to read more of this fic. I like the idea that the bond makes them love and care for each other; although, I'd like to know more about Snape's plan after he and Harry had bonded. You mentioned his plan in the first chapter, so I'm looking forward to seeing if anything comes of that or if the feelings from the bond ruined it.

Thanks for the chapters so far and I hope you plan to continue it!!
~Aislinn

Great fic and chapter. Can't wait to see what Harry and crew has in plan for Dumbledore and Voldemort (just notice how similar those names seem) Please update soon.

ILL KILL THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great story but ILL KILL THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey! Is there anyway that I could find out when this is updated? Because I would really like to continue reading/reviewing this! It's an excelent story, well written! Keep up the good work and update soon!

Please Please Please keep writing!!!!

I really like your story. I would suggest that you don't put the bonding ceremony in the story. The details are most likely not going to impact the rest of the story. I would also like to suggest that you don't keep Harry Potter as the underdog for very long. Unless you want to turn this into a BDSM or a slave fic - which I hope you don't I like the plot the way its been so far. Anywho, keep it up and I hope to see a new chapter soon.

I think I might actually enjoy your story. :) I\'m not usually into lots of angst (since I\'m easily depressed), but I do like Powerful/Manipulative!Harry. And since I also like Snape/Harry, this is combining two of my favorite dishes into one. ::grins::

The only critique I have is to maybe get a beta reader, or to re-read each chapter with a red pen to check for possible mistakes. I found a few instances of misspelling (Which I can\'t usually do myself), grammatical errors, and unclosed paranthesis. The one that really stuck in my mind (since I just finished reading that section), was how you had Harry call Severus \"Sevvie\", but then you spelled it \"Sevie\" when Severus was reacting to it.

I\'m really looking forward to the next chapter. I also can\'t wait to see the school\'s reaction when Harry & co. get resorted.

As to your question; Unless there is a detail in the bonding that will be important later, I would not include the actual bonding. Maybe some of the \"guests\" and Severus and Harry\'s reactions, both before and afterwards.

This is good.

Argh!! Update already!! Pleassseeee! Here, have brownies--update soon now???