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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! Now, who is Hermione's (Cyrna) mate?
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! You've done really well with it. I don't think I've ever read one where Hermione was a Malfoy. I really like how she warned her family about Harry. That was sweet. And the Malfoy's seem so nice! Great job. I can't wait to read more.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can not wait for the next chapter. Please update soon, and I'll review again. I promise!!! PAH-WEESE?
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe! i love sub!harry and dom!draco!! update soon! ^_^
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't Wait, Great Story. I've been patiently waiting for a long time for the 4th chapter. Now I can't wait for the 5th.
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is sooo cool, i love the story line... it MAD!!! neways i'm jus stopping by to offer a piece of advice concerning the dialogue in ur DM & HSSD - the way i see it, when u write a dialogue in a story, don't make it seem as if u're writing what some else is saying, u noe try to put urself in the roles of ur characters and how u wud respond but still keeping the flavour of ur characters... make ur dialogues come together that is all i'm saying... neways ciao darling keep doing ya thang!
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is sooo cool, i love the story line... it MAD!!! neways i'm jus stopping by to offer a piece of advice concerning the dialogue in ur DM & HSSD - the way i see it, when u write a dialogue in a story, don't make it seem as if u're writing what some else is saying, u noe try to put urself in the roles of ur characters and how u wud respond but still keeping the flavour of ur characters... make ur dialogues come together that is all i'm saying... neways ciao darling keep doing ya thang!
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May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please up date soon I can\'t wait to see what Harry and Draco\'s reaction is going to be when they find out that they are mate\'s. and Harmione\'s when Snape is her\'s I think that he is going to be her mate. can you please let me know when you up date.
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May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter! If only we could actually see the look on Snape\'s face! I know I would be dying from laughter! I wonder how Ron feels about all this! I can\'t wait for more!
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May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter