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for The Rules of the Game

by skydreamer22

person miku
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! oooh! What's up with draco? I can't wait to find out. Well done with this chapter! xxx
person frozenrose
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I love your new chapters. Hope that you can update again (when class time permits it) and soon.
person lonelyreverance
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you and I hate you you update regularly but at the same time so far apart! Then you give me cliffhangers
person Artemis
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ great chapter ><
person ryuuta
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot, an update! Better late than never, take your time and update when you can. No point in morphing fanfic into another obligation.

Harry's life is so crappy in comparision that I was not even upset when he killed the guy. That's where Dark Lords come from. I was upset with Draco though, but I guess we cannot expect anything else with the information he has.

Did Snape not know how dangerous it was to leave Harry hungry?
person Shigirl
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon! You're killing me here >.<
person proftlb
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I'm so happy you updated! I try to avoid pestering authors, but I needed a Rules fix:)

Something occured to me as I was reading this chapter... Why doesn't Remus affect Harry when he's craving Dark Magic? If he's worried about visiting Ira since she's a dark creature, wouldn't a werewolf cause a similar reaction?

I think Snape is being a bit harsh. I know he's Draco's godfather, but he knows that Harry has some issues, even if he doesn't know what those issues are. He's also been a teacher long enough to know that teenagers argue all the time, particularly those in a relationship. To deny Harry sustenance because he had an argument with Draco is a bit mean. Then again, I guess you never said Snape would be nice:) Well, looking back at the prologue, at least I know they work things out eventually. I am really looking forward to the next chapter!
person Fencing Freak
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!! It's been almost a month, no it has been a month since you updated either of your HP stories. I need the angst and controversy in your stories to spice up my own life. There are other good stories out there but none like yours!
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY...First chapter done...AMAZING...have to read more. Hold on more understandble review when i'm done.
person miku
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this has really been fantastic to read so far. I loved the end of this chapter. I'm looking forward to reading further chapters. xx Keep up the exelent work! xx