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for The Rules of the Game

by skydreamer22

person Demeter
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is actually the first time I've reviewed a story on this website so you should be feeling mighty pleased with yourself that I enjoyed this story so much that I have deigned to review to badger you about its abandonment. Seriously, update; this story is freaking amazing. I love it. You've created fantastically fleshed out characters that remain consistent in their actions, your plot is frankly brilliant and your writing style is fabulous. I've almost run out of superlatives so I'm just going to tell you that, on the whole, your story is marvellous.
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, bravo!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hum, by the way, do you know if there's a story alert system on aff? To know when the stories are updated, cause I can't find any mention of it anywhere? Thanks a lot!
Good luck writing!
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good grief. no wonder he went dark.
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is great!!!! I can't wait to read more of it!
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really hope you decide to continue this....
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is SO good i really hope you continue the story :D thank you for writing it!
person Flame150
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! Why did you have to leave at a cliff hanger?!? I hope you update this story soon because you haven't in the past two years and I would to see what happens next.
person llyoung
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. You write so wonderfully. I hope that you are able to continue this story some time in the future.
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP GOING YOU'VE GOT ME HOOKED!
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is truly amazing despite being a fanfic i'd have paid good money for that!

though i have to say I'm incredibly annoyed it isn't finished!!! I love dark harry and this one is so good although it wouldn't have hurt to have made it actually english it does slightly annoy me when american writers refer american systems it's set in the UK that's just bad researching(personal annoyance being british i can't help it)but since the amazingness of your writing it so great i can forgive you. :P

I would be forever grateful if your brilliant(in both english and american) mind got the creative urge to pick this fic up again, although i know how hard that is... i couldn't stop reading and now there no more to read it is devastating :'(

yours in great hope of a return to The Rules of the Game
a loyal fan

P.S i apologize for my appalling spelling and grammar i've just written an english essay and it tends to drain my writing abilities