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for The Rules of the Game

by skydreamer22

person fatchixrock2
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! My daily dose of heroine has returned!!!!!! How was Hawia? Not to be mean, but do us all a favor and get a laptop! Then u can update where ever you go! Yippeeee!!!
person Tashia
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly LOVE this fic!!! continue please!!! <3
person newmoongirl
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good!! :) i like it. though i don't know how to get this thing to alert me for a newe chapter. do you? if so, could you tell me please? thank you.
person Night Shade
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* he /bit/ Severuss, how amusing. I'm glad you updated, pleasse do sso again.
person harryhollow
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please e-mail me when you start to update please... i just can't wait to read more hehehehehehe....
person Doxkid
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF? Ok, i can understand the 'Dursley rape" thing as that seems to be a theem on this site. I can understand the great magical control at like 6 because harry is just plain powerful. But why the hell does harry let the dursleys rape him? He can control the minds of others, so why didn't he just think Vernon away and get beaten or something. I tolerate slash, but not 'im a little pussy so rape me whenever you want even though i am practically god' harry. Are you a pedophile or something? Maybe you where raped so you think "Everyone will love this, who doesn't liike reading about rape on a fanfiction site. At least put some warnings up so noone accidentally reads this trash.
person Doxkid
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the fuck??? Harry can create clone of himself, and can lie put the queens ass, but can't create a clone when he is about to get raped? Ths story is seriously getting worst and worst. Danm horny fangirl authors and their love of rape. i can tolerate slash unlike by brother Doxkid (the real one, he doesn't come here anymore soo...) but this is rediculus.

PS,
Don't tell doxkid that i am using his name because he would kill me where i stand.
person Jemma
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. loving this story so much. glad you got rid of lockhart. Need more. it's addictive. please, please update
person Olivia
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gasp*
I can't believe you made a cliffhanger.
T.T
This isn't good.
I need more.
Nobody else on my list of fics had updated.
Gah.
Great chapter, I like to see Harry suffer with this for some reason.
I hope he works through this soon.
*le sigh*
I'm off to read mediocre fics in place of yours.
Tata.
person Bobcat
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is such an amazing story, i love how you completly retold the books. this storry is so cathing, its not so drawn-out that it takes all of your attention just to keep reading, but its not so short that nothing really makes sense. i cant WAIT for the next chapter! YOU ROCK!