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for The Rules of the Game

by skydreamer22

schedule October 6, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I liked the story, I really did. But his abuse was starting to piss me off. And I felt sorry for him getting raped repeatedly every time he was at the Dursley's. And I'm curious as to what Harry is that he craves the dark magic in dark wizards or witches. What kind of creature hungers for the dark magic in someone's blood? And I really hoped that it would have been a Harry/Tom Riddle fanfic but instead it was a Drarry fic. Not that I'm disappointed in that. I just prefer Tom and Harry together. Even though Drarry is another of my favorites. Keep up the good work and I hope there will be an update soon.

schedule October 5, 2019 at 12:00 AM

It makes me mad that Severus doesn't recognize the signs of an abused child. When he was abused himself. I'm guessing he's just refusing to see the obvious because of his excuses to hate him. I never did like Severus hating him just because of what his father James had done when they were students. Harry had nothing to do with what his father did. He's not guilty of what James did. And he is most definitely not responsible for the public humiliation and the loss of Lily as his friend. He did that to himself when he called her a mudblood. Which shouldn't be seen as an insult but everyone is offended by the word.

person Miya
schedule April 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is such I good story ,I can't wait to find out what creature harry is ,and if he is going to hook up with Voldemort .
person Melissa
schedule February 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really really hope you pick this back up eventually.
person Tiffany (Melina)
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved this so much I am posting my first review this story is one of the best i've read and i've been reading fanfiction.net and adult-fanfiction.org since 2010
My favorite quote from this story is "Well Severus, I have to admit I haven't seen you hate a student so much in years, and you haven't even met this one."

I hope this story is continued at the time of this review there are only 27 chapters :( I need more I think I'm addicted to this story
person natasha
schedule February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow this story was brilliant. so I really can't wait for more to come to this great story. please let me know when there will be an update ok.:)*
person Chessesticks
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Write more goddammit!
person Cherry
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMGG! This story is so amazing! By far my favorite tom/Harry! You are doing an amazing job with the story line and character developments! Please, please, please update soon! Thank you!

~cheers!
person Fairy dust
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Can't wait for th update!
person Faery66
schedule February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
If you find the time please up date this story. Thank you