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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No! NO! No block now! Your fic is woderful! Your style of writing is refreshing; mostly humorous but overly so, the beginning, franky, kept me on my toes and I was glad it turned out all right. You managed to make Harry a victim but he's still able to keep his resistance up (for an admirably long time). And Draco's characterization was just masterful! You kept him so human the reader could forgive him pretty much straight away (and concerning what he did it might not have been that easy). He screws up (a couple of times) but makes up for it. You pulled it off - you truly did. Even D's bravery fits perfectly with his 'man on a mission' attitude and he just comes across as sex crazed (but crazy about Harry so it's OK :) possessive (but aparently also protective) guy, so we can totally root for him.
Harry, despite of keeping his head and fighting like he should, is so sweet and perfectly innocent.
The the way you have written him is delicious - simply disarming :) Blaise and Pansy are likewise PERFECT in their roles and I like Hermione too, the talk she had with Draco outside the Tower entrance was well executed :) Draco is just so.. REAL, not that he's perfectly INC (which is good since his kind of wimp could hardly pull any of this off ;) but he's so human like I already mentioned.. and H pulls my heart strings so what else does one need? I'm sure I forgot something.. (but if you're nice and update soon I could remeber that in a second review ;)
Really, wonderful piece of work - entertaining and believable. I'll look forward to seeing more jealous action on D's part (Nott is going to want to test-drive our sweet Harrykins, I just know it, can't have that :) And I smell more trouble in the paradise in a form of a unamused father :) can't wait :p
Harry, despite of keeping his head and fighting like he should, is so sweet and perfectly innocent.
The the way you have written him is delicious - simply disarming :) Blaise and Pansy are likewise PERFECT in their roles and I like Hermione too, the talk she had with Draco outside the Tower entrance was well executed :) Draco is just so.. REAL, not that he's perfectly INC (which is good since his kind of wimp could hardly pull any of this off ;) but he's so human like I already mentioned.. and H pulls my heart strings so what else does one need? I'm sure I forgot something.. (but if you're nice and update soon I could remeber that in a second review ;)
Really, wonderful piece of work - entertaining and believable. I'll look forward to seeing more jealous action on D's part (Nott is going to want to test-drive our sweet Harrykins, I just know it, can't have that :) And I smell more trouble in the paradise in a form of a unamused father :) can't wait :p
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh! great chapter!! i like harry on top. ;)
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!! Your story is Amazing! I love it! You write very steamy sex scenes. You\'ve got great plot what with Draco having to find a way to win Harry and have him all to himself and keep him save from his Father and Voldemort and Nott. I think you did a great job on their first date, and I wonder how Snape will react? I hope to read more soon! ^__-
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May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* where\'s the rest of it?? i...i...need more!! gawds i\'m nearly addicted to this...no wait, scratch that, i AM addicted to this!!! *sigh* it was lovely...really..u actually managed to make me squeal and laugh out loud...i can say that you\'re incredibly talented and if you don\'t finish this i might just cry, aside from other withdrawal symptoms...the flow of the story wasn\'t rushed and not damn freakin slow(i hate it when people do that) so i really enjoyed it...aaaaaaaaaaaaah the joys of funny draco/harry!!! ah well...watever...hope your writer\'s block goes away REAL REAL quick n that you update soon...=D
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May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This a great story! I love the interaction between Draco and Harry. I hope you get over your writer\'s block and update soon!
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May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love Love Love it with a capital L....
I can\'t wait to see you post more!!!! :dance:
I can\'t wait to see you post more!!!! :dance:
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May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is the best I\'ve read so far! There was some shocking parts and a little bit of a twist, it was really cool.
I love Draco and how he tries to get Harry, even though Harry refuses.
I really want to read what happens next and what will happen to them in the end. Cause this is actually my favorite story here.
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May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful! It\'s passionate and full of drama between Draco and Harry. And the characters hasn\'t change one bit.
Please you HAVE to add another thrilling chapter, you just have to!!
Don\'t leave us like this!
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May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY ROCKS!!!
PLEASE UPDATE!!
I WANT TO READ MORE OF IT!!!
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May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot and the story is over all well written. However, while reading I encountered many typos and missing words. I would encourage you to re-read your own work and to get a beta reader. It\'s hard to enjoy a story if words are missing or spelled wrong/unrecognizable. Other than that I think you have a good thing going and I hope you continue it.