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for Dance with the Devil

by JCB

person beeky63
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew! You had me worried there when Rudolphus showed up, but Severus got it sorted. LOl. Great story, I\'m on my knees begging for more, Lol. Toodles.
person anon
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wierd story... doesnt make any sense at all. and u\'re cetainly into torture right?
person MudBlood Malfoy
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What is to happen next !!!!!!!!! I Know Ginny get her head cut off be a magical flying shoe hmmm what do you think, it\'s insane gold.

Please update SOON
person beeky63
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is dark and dangerous and well written. But OMG what is going to happend now that Rudolphus knows that Severus is up to something. Please update soon. Toodles.
person Katelynxm
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, this story rox my sox!

I\'m sorry I haven\'t reviewed much*embarrased cough*, but I\'ve been away, and I had to read all the chapters posted before I reviewd, because it is just too good to stop reading for more than 5 seconds.

Hmmm, where to begin? Except that I LOVE DRACO!!!! One, you didn\'t kill him, although your did give me a fright when you mentioned Fenrir ^^;.
Two, he\'s such a smarmy bastard, I love it! But I wonder if Lucius is evil, if he is then this means there must be some serious mixed up emotions in poor Draco. Oh well, I\'m sure George will comfort him. Draco/George, so cute!

Snape snape snape snape, what is there to say? You write the best most enjoyable to read Snape in any fanfiction I have read this far, I just can\'t get enough of him, he\'s emotionaly unstable, he\'s sarcastic, he\'s sneaky, and he\'s horny baby!

-His eyes opened slowly and a sleepy smile crossed his lips.
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing update. I hope that he doesnt break her heart. You posted Chapter 14 twice. Cant wait to read more.
person MudBlood Malfoy
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He HE HE Off to the haven we go can wait to find out what happens. I do hope you plan on writing more fics after this one
person shmoe
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. I should have updated my own fic tonight but I got caught up in yours and I was so disapointed when I ran out of chapters. You should have more reviews then 5 so far! The fic is bloody awesome!
person Jaden Snape
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just cruel. Add more soon please.
person magical heather
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHH that is an evil cliffy...but now Snape isnt going to want tell her anymore and they were being so sweet and learning about each other and I cant wait to read more.