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for Dance with the Devil

by JCB

person Anon
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is truly amazing, i love it and i can not wait for teh next chapter! Please hurry or i might die!
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are amazing. for the first time in months i have been captivated by a story. i have always been a fan of hg/ss stories, and the marriage law challenge(MLC) was a brilliant challenge that birthed many good stories. i almost didnt read this fic because many of the off shoots from the MLC, where people used the general idea but modified it to thier own wishes, were poorly done and were written only because the author didn\'t or couldn\'t to stay within the bounds of the challenge. but, i decided to give it a try and was blow away. you have created a true AU. you how a command of language that seems to be lacking in many other stories, making it enjoyable to read your works rather than tiresome and repetitive. it\'s really quite refreshing.
i love the details, i love the description. i love the vocabulary. you\'ve crafted a brilliant story.
keep it coming.

KaS
person aleja221
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this rocked I love. please write more soon i cant wait to see what will happen next.
person Kiwi
schedule May 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... like totally.... WOW!! Have I mentioned that I think you\'re BLOODY BRILLIANT????? .... wow.... you are going to continue RIGHT?? *holds up fist*
person Fiona
schedule May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
<3 OOh. Riveting...


... Aw... Ron...

Bah.

Stupid Weasleys.

More soon!
person Koryn
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely loving this story. It\'s my new obsession. I think about what has happened in the plot, and what is going to happen, all the time. I find myself checking back for updates several times a day, even though I know there won\'t be anything new. This story is brilliant and I can\'t wait for more. You\'re doing an excellent job. I am notoriously picky about what I read, so when I told my boyfriend that I had found a story, he commented, \"Wow, it must be really good.\" And it is! Keep going, you have an amazing talent. This story is refreshingly original.
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll always love ya, babe!!! Wow, an angry Snape- not to be trifled with!!! Hopefully all the meddlers well get the message- leave his Hermione alone!!! I love the twists and the depth you write into your stories! Bravo, doll, keep up the great work!!! Happy writing, dearie! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and sloppy kisses,
Killer K :)
person magical heather
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the update...but why is Snape being so understanding about the pregrancy and how she wantes him to stay I would think that he would be kinda pissed. I still cant wait to read more
person Moyra
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Weasleys are under a curse by Persy? That explains a lot! Thankfully they are not as daft as the seemed to be before!
But Draco is! Why has he to spill out that Hermione is pregnant???
Looking forward to your next update
person Estella
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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