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for When they came back

by Darknessmaster

person momoko
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story
person roxierose13
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t have any ideas, but I do like it! My suggestion, separate the dialogues to make it easier to read. :) Other than that, we have got to get Ron over to the side of the light! lol. We just gotta get him to understand :)
person Amessis
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I liked how Sirius is the one to recognize Ron\'s short comings. Hmm, do I see some Sev and Sirius fun in the future?
person l\'etje
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was soooooooooooooooooo good keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Amessis
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! I really hope they give Draco a chance. I can\'t believe Harry didn\'t stand up for Draco against Ron!
person Afraidofreality
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO how could u leave me on a cliff hanger!
I wanna read the rest now..
Please update soon!!!
person anon
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person LadyIsis
schedule April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the start of this story and hope there is more to come, I read this chapter before all the changes that AFF made, and hope you update soon. I can\'t wait to see how Sirius, James and Lily react to Draco!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
person l\'tje
schedule April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going this was a very very good beginning
post soon
bye bye
person Anon
schedule April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intersting update soon I wonder how would take it when they findout about thre son\'s lover.