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yay, you updated. The chapter was really good, I liked the way you described harry's feelings.
so here's a cookie *gives cookie*
-Mino ((aka Minoko))

I'm enjoying this. I hope you update again soon. I look forward to more. ::MV::

im really liking this story and sssssssooooooooocant wait for more...so ill be waitin...have fun writin
-Nita

*shocked stupid* Neville and Dray, *hums* I womder, *goes to find other fics to read after yours* great first chapter by that way. Very original to say the least.

Evil is what I do. Can I use that XD? great chapters. I found it hilarious poor Lucius so naive.

Is there an update in the near future O.o? Because that would be realllly nice. *starts babbling* I really really liked it, why do we authors seem to put Harry and voldie into the smart asses. I swear we do they're always teasing each other or threatening each other with empty threats. Great chapters that I didn't review. I was to caught up in the story to review. So please update soon!!

I like it. It was a bit funny;) Who is the vampire Sirius knows? hurry up with more

I love the story so far.. it's always good when harry goes bad but you still get to like severus, sirius, the malfoys, and remus (did you notice my subtle hint?) can't wait for more

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING AND SOON! THIS STORY IS GREAT, BUT PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOU, ADD MORE TO IT! I AND THE REST OF YOUR READERS WOULD REALLY LOVE IT! IF YOU WOULD PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEASE I AM ABOUT TO GO INSANE FROM ALL OF THE SUSPENSE, AND DON

First of all, there is no background info at all. I am left with questions such as "What made Harry go dark?", and "How did Harry and Tom's relationship start?". Not just that, but the plot development is so slow that I am wondering if the story even has a point. Almost all the characters are out of character with little to no reason as to why. I do not wish you to take this the wrong way. I believe you have potential, but in order for you to reach that potential you need to spend more time clueing the readers in to what is happening in the story and why these things are happening. Forgive me if my comments seem insulting, for they are not meant to be so.

Sincerely,
myself