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Uhm, yeah. This story honestly has potential, but isn't living up to it. Also, were you aware that you put the same story out twice? The least you could have done was to put something different in the summary. Anyway, as I said, this could have been an interesting story but it flows too fast and there isn't enough description. I mean, you go from him being in the train to him being at the Dursleys to him being at the Dark Lord's lair and being annoyed by Neville (Whom you don't explain what he's doing there or how) and that randomly Draco and Neville are Harry's only friends and are together. I think this story would be so much better if you actually took the time to flesh it out some. Then it would be worth having the same story up twice. Fix these things, and I'll happily re-read the story. Thank you for reading this, even though it kind of acts like a flame.

this is a good story wish you would complete it thanks for the start

I LOVE THE STORY ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATED SOON?

greatness! another chapter would make it even better *hint, hint, nudge, nudge;)* email me when you update: pwfan626@aol.com
Cheers!

love this...Please, Please, PLEASE write more!!!!!!!!!!

Love To All,
Jessica

"Like I always say, there's no "I" in team...there's a "me" though, if you jumble it up."
--Dr. Gregory House

Continue updating because I want to continue reading this awesome story so, please update!

Your chapters are too short. Otherwise its a good story.

Oh I love intrigue. Please update again when you can!! ::MV::

*lol* Lovely and why must you leave off such a cliche??????
Come on please update soon!!! I love your story ^_^