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for Surprisingly, She Didn\'t

by Remetan

person Queen Celestia
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is intriguing! Gah Must read more..
person Bek Allen
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant :) I\'m truly loving this fic, the idea of Hermione with no memory whatsoever is not entirely new to me, but I\'ve read and seen far more Fic where Severus is the one that is often the victim of such things as mind-loss and what not. I\'ve only ever read one other \'Amnesia!Hermione\' fic, but that was done with obliviate. The way you are weaving this is very intriguing. I look forward to your next update :)

Just one small note (I\'ve not read the other reviews yet, so I apologize in advance if you know already), but after the end of every piece of spoken dialogue, there is a funny square type thing for chapter ten. It could just be my computer, but it only appeared in this last chapter. Not that it\'s a bad thing, but it can be a little distracting.

Update soon :)
person Afraidofreality
schedule May 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please update soon
i loved your story, when u update email me so i can read it xD
keep writing!!
x
person Kenda
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see a new chapter of this up this morning, I was practically bouncing in my seat. You are doing such a great job on this, I love the slow build up and their growing awareness of each other, and how manipulative, but charming you have made Severus. And even without her memories, you do a superb job of keeping Hermione in character. Brilliant, I\'m looking forward to more.
person septentrion
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 9 : Severus too is in danger of loosing his self-control, and it\'s only fair ! That slow seduction is maddening me, could you please update sooner ? Sorry but I\'m greedy ;)
person Anon
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Once again a new chapter, and I\'m liking it more and more. The old Hermione is shining through now, and I can\'t wait till Severus tries his (sexy) moves on her! Perfectly convenient that Draco\'s out of the house, and can\'t wait to find out what happens no this hazy, warm spring day. Thanks again, and hope to read more soon. Peace!

Love, me.
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi again, I\'m glad that you\'re reposting all the chapters to this wonderful story, and can\'t wait for the continuation of such a successful fic. Hope to read more soon, and peace!

Love, me.
person MarzBar
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hermoine is in a difficult position. Both of them wish to bed her but have decided on different tactics to accomplish it. Maybe instead of slapping Draco, she can make a negative impact on his family jewels.
person septentrion
schedule April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I could take a liking in gardening if I had Severus as a tutor ;)
person septentrion
schedule April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 5 : just to let you know that ch 5 needs some format fixing.