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ch 4 : I think there\'s a chapter missing between ch 3 and 4. If Hermione isn\'t psychologically destroyed by Dolohov\'s and Nott\'s actions, then she\'s a very strong person. I wonder why Draco was shocked : was Hermione supposed to be safe from now on ? Please update soon !

So, you think it was Regelus too, huh?

A deliciously naughty story to read. I rather enjoyed every bit of it! A couple spelling errors, but that\'s just your spellchecker messing it up, I think. I didn\'t see any grammar problems.

OMG...I really think this story is great. Before anyone starts yelling at me that rape can\'t be good, I know that and I despise it, but nevertheless I think it\'s great written and hope for an update very soon.
I wanna where you\'re taking the story from here and when Snape will appear in the picture.
So please update very soon.

greetings! nice story you have there. i have to say i\'m impressed, especially since english is not your first language. i would just like to point out a small problem in chapter 2, you have confused the words thigh (the upper part of the leg) and tight (the opposite of loose). there are some other very negligible mistakes, ones that are easily fixed. may i suggest getting someone fluent in english to check over your works? if you can\'t find anyone, i would be happy to help proof read. i love your plot, very good work.

KaS

I am enjoying the story, but some of the words are rather confusing. I think perhaps the Word grammer editor was give too much leaway...

Regardless, thank you for writing. I appreciate the time it takes to write for us.