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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boy talk about the two of them guilty tripping themselves. lol
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good for Severus! Keep 'em coming.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 1-10: I like the story so far. it is very intersting.....and has just the right amount of...well....everything. i only have one complaint. i know that snape has been in azkaban for a long time, but u should make him a bit more snarky...or maybe sarcastic.....he sounds a bit like a puppy dog now....a ver sexy one though! Ohter than that though, i really love your story, and am waiting for an update! Please update soon!!!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good work. Would there be lemons in the next chapter?
Toodles.
Toodles.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was some kiss!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
coming along nice and seems very real to me. And looks like snape is really for some action. Just got to say i love this story so far and still wating for a update.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say, you are an insufferable tease!!! Leave us hanging, on the edge of our seats, once again. Goodness, Gracious!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far please continue.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, just a couple of things. It is "throes" not "throws of passion," "stared" not "starred," and "he was the luckiest guy in Azkaban" not "her." Very well done otherwise, and since they were close to the end, it was obvious they were overlooked because whoever beta'd for you was very much into it! Great chapter, and I can't wait to see what Hermione thinks about the kiss and what she intends to do about it. Great job making Severus slightly crazy (could he be going over the top soon?).
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* OMG O_o I totally love your story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Ekk! I mean what did Hermione really think of the proffessor's hot steamy kiss. Dude I totally love it. Kudos to you!