rate_review Reviews

the premise of the story isn't bad. . .actually it's quite good. but your characters and the story itself could definitely use some fleshing out. you;ve started along that path with letting us see some of their inner thoughts but it kinda goes nowhere. you dont talk about Hermione going to meet with everyone and even Minerva only gets a couple of lines. . . one would think that they'd all take quite some convincing. plus, getting them into bed was a little too easy and that scene was a bit OOC for each of them. . .the first time i've really felt so. i can't wait to read more of the story and i hope this helps some!

GREAT! GREAT! GREAT! I love it! =)

Guess Severus showed her huh? I can't wait to read more! this story is really getting interesting.

Tiffany

Oooh. Where does it lead to next? ...Gosh, it's so heartwarming.

what was going on? you got me lost now? i thought she liked him?

Wow! Poor Severus! What's going to happen next? I can't wait to find out. Update again and soon.

Tiffany

Alright! Severus is free as if I didn't have any doubt. *Grins* Great job!

the sevvie we all know and love is finally BACK!!

Hey hun! Thanks for the reviews! I came across this story this morning and never noticed the author to be honest! LOL! It was the sixth or seventh chapter before I looked and was like HEY THAT's MRSSNAPE!! Anyway! I loved this!! Short to the point easy read! Following along was easy and yet I could still understand the little details. I did see a few spelling mistakes, but nothing I couldn't comprehend. It's a really good plotline! Can't wait to see exactly if Hermione will go "all the way" or not! HEHEHE!

great i cant wait to see what happens next
keep it coming
this is a great story