rate_review Reviews

I love this plotline. Let's see how the know-it-all gets him out of this one. I'm on the edge of my seat. More soon?

I cannot wait to see what else happens my friend! Update when you can please.

Great chapter! You really do get better with each update. Well done! Keep up the good work and don't make us wait too long for the next update.
Toodles.

Unique. This is the first HG/SS fic I've read in a while that actually has a really good plotline. Nice work. I can't wait to see what happens next. New Chapters Soon, Please!

I have read all your recent stories and I have to say they were not very good. Lots of spelling mistakes, grammatical errors and the plot jumped from scene to scene without any continuity. However with this story you have really improved your writing skills. There are very few spelling mistakes and your grammer has greatly improved. The plot is more solid and flows much more smoothly. The plot is also interesting and has definately got me hooked. I am really looking forward to more updates. Be very proud of yourself. Practice makes perfect and if you can improve this much in such a short space of time, you will soon be a writer to be reckoned with. WELL DONE!
Toodles.

all right! Lets get our boy Severus out of that hell hole! Go Hermione! *catches breath* Great chapters, Love them.

oh this will be good.

As much as I like this story, I can't help but wonder if you are just posting to appease your reviewers. There is little substance to each of these "chapters" that I could hardly even call them that. I would call them glimpses if anything. As I said I like the premis of this but you need to work on development a bit more and challenge yourself to write at least 1000 words for the next chapter before you post.

Ithilin

Poor Severus! Well Hermione to the rescue....I hope she finds something to free him from that horrid place. Update soon please this story is wonderful.

Cute; this has great potential. Can't wait to see how Snape gets out and how the relationship developes!