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for Burlesque My Heart

by xsexxandxcandyx

person Lisa
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kayy
Love the chapter!
lol poor ruby, she has no idea...
ha ha COLBOURNE! lol
who lives there now Kayy? :P
keep writing!
love ya!
-Lisa
person Kris
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The name of this fic is hilarious! There are some annoying parts, but you should finish this!
person Liz
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kayy,
Now I wasn't to sure about reading this after "Drunken Mistake", because in essence that story and its predisesor was a mistake even though I'm sure that was your first attempt. Please don't continue it I'm BEGGING! But I love this story and the torrid passion between them. As well as the sence of naught with Ginny "mentally/physically" cheating. I just wish the chapers were longer. And will she change her mind after she really has Draco. This can be really passionate if you put you heart into it. I love passion it's the essence of life!

Ps: If you need a beta for this I'm willing...
person Cas
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LoL Ginny\'s seems so confused hahaha (GO FOR DRACO) Keep writing loved it <3<3<3
person Lisa
schedule May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapters really good,
wonder how Ginny\'s gf is gunna feel bout the kissing.lol
keep writing!!!!
peace out
love ya!
-Lisa
person Curliusa
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want to know what happens next...
person Cas
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I didn\'t bugg you that much ...Did I?? Well sorry..I really like your stories there...Interesting LoL and Draco and Ginny make a good couple haha Well..Ya update soon..On all the stories hopefully LoL
Love ya byee
Cas
person Cas
schedule May 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your sitting besid eme so you already know I like the new chapter ...but I felt like reviewing it anyway...BYEZZ!
person Cassie
schedule May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the newest chapter! Ginny is a fun drunk! Also great choice of song for her to sing to! I\'m wondering what Malfoy is up to! Why is he stalking Ginny! Yet it was so nice of him to take her home! Hope to read more soon cause I love your story!
person Cassie
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story is going I hope you continue it soon!