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for Burlesque My Heart

by xsexxandxcandyx

person lakailah
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Please update soon!!!!!
person Jade
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loving the story its getting really indepth, only problem is the chapters are so short you just start to get into it and then it ends, cant wait to see if she is pregnant, wonderful story keep up the good work. cant wait till the next chapter!!!
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why did you respond twice in chap-10 & 11 about my comment. I'm flattered that you aknowledged my comment, but in case you think I ment it as anything other than constructive... I didn't. I have the same problem occasionly. I think your story is good, but there is always room for improvement. I get the sense that you think fast. in that case it's not so necessary just to lengthen your chapters, but to add more meat.

~Take Care~
person Tabitha
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good keep it coming :) And I saw the remark about bad grammar, I haven't noticed a lot but if you want a beta I'd be more than happy!
person billy
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon, good story
person Synder
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Keep up the good work!
person Elvra
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wine, chocolate, and FF are my life, rofl

Love the chapter, it was coincidence that I stumbled on it again, but I'm glad I did. interesting twist, but if I could be inclined to say, I'm looking more toward Rubys reaction than whether or not Ginny gets pregnant.

Update!
Elvra
person Aubrey
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! Nother chappie!! Is the next one going to take as long? I liked it! I hope she gets pregnate and leaves Ruby (No offence, I just think Draco and Ginny are cute together.)
person Vetta Daughter
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Update soon and be careful of the grammer.
person HoLdiNg HaNdS iS mY FaVoRiTe
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story!!! i can't wait till you write more soon... i can't wait to see what is going to happen between ginny and draco and if rudy knows or not... well until then keep up the good work!