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for Burlesque My Heart

by xsexxandxcandyx

person Lauren
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poopsticks! You have one more chapter left and then a sequel (I hope).
I look forward to reading them ^.^
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far, although I do have to say something. I'm going to assume you are pro-life from the way you described abortion, but as someone who's a governing member of a pro choice group at my university, I have to let you know, there's nothing painful about an abortion done correctly and early enough in a pregnancy. Sorry for any offense caused, I just like to set records straight. Hope to read more of the story soon!
person Lenuca
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice writing. I love it. Going to look for the sequel now ;)
person jaimie
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story line it's good I think Ruby is lame and draco is a better catch not to mention the fact that he is good looking and sensitive.

Just so ou know I believe your stories to be fully tought out well planned and AWESOME!

So please update as soon as possible!
person luvhp
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, what a nice happy ending. Can't believe Ruby was cheating on Ginny. Hell her being mad at Ginny is BS since she's the one who pushed her out the door to walk him home. Idiot.

Great story!
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO! I can't wait to read more. I hope that everything goes well. I am glad that you are thinking of a sequal after you finish this one you could take this to lengths unknown with her being away from her family and dracos parents and with Draco already having a son. Good Luck with it all! ;)
person Martine
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwww...they lurve each other...oh and i just knew RubyBitch was up to something. The pot calling the kettle black there for you folks haha thats funny! "You offered me a place to stay..." haha serves you right Ruby lmao. One more chapter huh, and a possible sequel, yea I can deal with that lol, looking forward to it.

snuggles, K.F.F.
person Jade
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another excelent chapter sooo glad that ruby found out i was getting sick of her, nice twist with her cheating on ginny also!

keep up the good work
person Martine
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay another update!!! 'bout time too. Yay! Draco showed up!!! but what's going on with ruby?! update soon please.

K.F.F. snuggles!
person Jade
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, cant wait to find out what happens between ginny and ruby, poor thing is going to be crushed, however i would choose draco over almost any one anyday of the week!!!

keep up the good work