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for Pathetic

by BakaAlchemist

person Tyrisha
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
rather beautiful, even if both of them did die in the end
person otakufan03
schedule April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* That was very well done and managed to keep my attention the whole time. XD I enjoyed reading it. The only annoyance i had was with my computer changing some of the characters to japanese kanji but what can I do. XD Well done.
person nerd_out
schedule April 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! That was amazing! I honestly cried at the end. I love the fact you eased them into a friendship/relationship thing rather than them just saying \'K so Im pretty much cool with you now...Best Friends?\' \'Yeah okay that sounds good\'. Very well done indeed. You have to write another Harry/Snape. You simply MUST. lol.
person Sophia
schedule April 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very wonderful, very sad fic. I actually was in tears a bit at the end. I was also quite pissed at the Weasleys, Dumbledore, and everyone else who had abandoned them. Very well written and emotional. Keep up the good work with all of your fics.~Sophia
person setosgirl (not signed in)
schedule April 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad... It was great. Poor Severus... I don\'t care that much about Harry, but He\'s a lot more tolerable in your story than in hte books anyway, so I can care a little bit. ^_^ Great job!