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for One Fine Day

by echtrae

schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, the staunch Harry/Ginny shipper I am.

I was a bit disappointed in the fact that it was just a dream; but I am glad it was a mutual dream... shame about the walls of the bedrooms separating them...

I am thinking of writing my own story with these two as I love them so much... in fact Harry, Ginny, Hermione and Neville are the only Gryffindors I like.

person Anon
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
clever.... good job
person StoryJunkie
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"She presses against him, trying to encourage him to participate with more than just his fingers."
This is my favorite sentence.
Enjoyed the scene, very clever to turn it into a sort of dream/spell. Very clever.
And honestly, who is this mother wulf of which you speak?
person Dorian
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story :)
Another chapter would be nice