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by GertrudeFlint

person Point
schedule February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I honestly dont know if I should feel sorry for percy or not.
person Pluma Desatada
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this fic was simultaneously really hot, heartbreaking and so true.
I really feel for Perce, I really do.
(Me = nerd and virgin until 21 but not because "i was saving myself" exactly... just no one would ask me. I had to go hunt down some dick myself...)
person Nee
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I read this story awhile ago, sometime in March. Anyway, I forgot where I had read your story, but I just kept thinking about it and how weird it was for me to feel sorry for a boy not to have been molested by his father. It just kept playing in my head, over and over, that I had to read it again. I eventually found it again and I knew that I must send you a review just for the simple fact of making me wonder if Percy was really loved in that family or if there was something about him that distanced him from his father. I kept trying to figure out what it was about Percy that was untouchable and what it was about his brothers that made them fair game. It also made me wonder when the sex started happening and if Ron was already participating or if he would be skipped over due to his friendship with Harry Potter.

Well, whatever the answers, I just wanted to say that you wrote a very successful story. I felt sorry for Percy and turned on by the sex. I could literally imagine Percy becoming colder and more withdrawn as he realizes that he's the only son that had not experienced that side of their father (Not including Ron. You never mentioned him beyond the first sentence). So, thanks for writing a story that screwed with my head and my beliefs about a proper family dynamic. I don't think I have come across another story like this before that involves incest. It was an interesting read and it definitely had an interesting effect on me. Thanks so much and I would love to see a sequel in the future about how Percy deals with his realization.
person Kelsey
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was...interesting... Disturbing, but different. I think I liked it. Which shocks me. Nicely done.
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I loooooved this!! Can't think of anything else to say, cause I'm all happy smiley and stuff, but I loved it!!
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a hot story
aww poor percy
person Samantha Whipps
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word...Hollyfuckenshitthatsot
person Ash
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted you to know that fred/george is the best pairing ever but i never would have thought of it with arther too. keep wrighting your amazing. This is one of the best stories ive read.
person none
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was...interesting