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for Fame and Misfortune

by Looneyluna

person Queen Celestia
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah babies! ^_^ It's finished. D: Now I have to go look for more well written stories! *complain*
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahahha. I like the whole unconventional status of the story.
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still like this. It's very well written Hooray!
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww an obliviated Hermione! This is getting even more interesting.
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There's one problem with your story -- since it's written so well I get stuck reading it and don't review as often!
Or maybe that's a good thing? =)
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stop being ridiculous Hermione!
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! It's a cliff hanger!! But mwuahahaha you have finished the story. So I won't be sitting about in agony. *goes to read some more*
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How is the next chapter being the last chapter GOOD news? D:<
person falconfamiliar
schedule May 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story has a good plot and story line but feels rushed in some parts and drags in others. Character development is important in each story as well as plot /story line continuity. It would be well worth reworking this to fill in the blank spots and explain some of the technical information that may not be known to the average reader
person meia
schedule May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fantastic! hilarious! watta great story! u\'re awesome! hope u write more! ^_^