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Lovely, a new chapter. I only just realised, so that was quite a nice surprise for this morning.

Hm, I like the basic plot and stuff. But I have a feeling that Hermione agreed a little too soon. I mean, she was throwing a fir and then she agreed. Just like that. But maybe the terms did the trick. Hehehe. Anyway, awesome! Oh and in many of the places instead of \"then\" you\'ve written \"than\" and other stuff I don\'t remember, just correct them dear ^_^ I really am eager to know what happens, I mean, it just can\'t be over with him marking her and then \"THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER! THE END\" haha! I dare you!

Heh. Write more!

Jane

I\'m so glad the site is functioning too, and I can\'t wait to read more. At least you\'ve had like, 2 months to write a ton of chapters.

I like this story. I can\'t wait for more chapters.

i love this it really good!!