rate_review Reviews

This story has been really fun to read. You have done well in keeping the characters acting like themselves. I see only a couple of spelling errors. On the upscale any errors that are exhistant in this story has not made it differcult to read. I also have great respect in your not having a chatroom like thing going on with your readers and keep the focus on the story as it should be. You are definitely an author that doesn't over use you authors notes to blather on about complete bull, therefore whenever you do have any I will be sure to check them out because I know you won't post an authors note unless it is needed. Some writers over use and they eventually invalidate there own comments because I just over look them knowing they are talking about themselves again and wasteing my time and theres which could better be used writing the story. Thanks for the listen. Wishing you well. The doctor.

Wow! The ministry sure is evil!!! I can't wait for an update. =o)

lol this was interesting and entertaining. I know a litle bit of german and I wanted to know what was going to happen. So a couple of days ago I tryed reading the german versions chapter 2 (or is it 3?). I must say, your german is very clear and easy to read in periods and then there are the parts that I need my litle turist dictonary to get. All in all, it was very enjoying to see how much german I still understand. If my old german books where as interesting as this, I would be fluent today. That's an idea! I can see the cover of the book " german for beginners, harry potter porn in easy to understand short stories" I'd buy it ;-)
Well, I enjoyed it so much, I think I'll read (or is that try to?) the german chapter before the english one so I can dubble check how much I understood.
BTW the new word for the day in german was deffinitly chopsticks. I totaly missed it and I couln't find it in my dictionary.

I liked the chapter. The whiping and the "we are forced to have sex" bit, was suprising, didn't see it coming and loved them. I think it's interesting and sweet that harry tryes to give draco a bit of what he is use to (the silk in his clothing and the schampoo) but still do just what he has to, as a "master" (slave clothing and whiping). very interesting fic and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

ok to Janus:this is a wonderful fic and i love it so much! LPease dont end up just randomly giving up in it. This has to be my favorite Master?slave fic ever.

to Le: I couldnt really find any problems that really stood out at all and thank you thank you thank you for translating this for all of our enjoyment.

good chapter

Friends . . . with benefits? Seems like a plan to me. I still can't wait to see what Potter and Malfoy eventually do to the ministry. By the way, who is the Weasly in charge?

Oh I've gotta have chapter 3! I was sooo worried about Draco's state of mind. Harry had Draco punish him but even Draco couldn't do it. I'm extremely glad that Harry and Draco plan to get to know each other now.

Great story! I can't wait to find out what happens. Poor Snape!!

Oh wow!! You need to update soon!! I want more!! I love this story already....

really loved this, great start, loved this scenario : draco - slave / harry - reluctant master. Looking forward to the next chapter

Cheers
Cass