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for Miscalculations

by JanusEris

person l\'etje
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this a very very good story one of the best i have read so far and i have already read a lot of stories
sp keep going and post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person Afraidofreality
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This storys really depressing and horrible, good writeing but,
what a sad story line:(
when u write some happy storys let me know:)
person Afraidofreality
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry i have so say
I hate this story
its so depressing
its just..why couldnt harry potter be happy,
why did u make him mean
WHY!!
person Lanta
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, I\'m a big fan of slave fics lol, and this is a well-written one. I love your portrayal of Severus. I have to admit though, I\'m a little confused by this latest chapter, but hopefully the next will clear things up.

I can\'t wait for the update, lol. I check this story at least once a day if not more to see if there\'s a new chapter (which is a little obsessive I admit, but still). I love it.
person avihenda
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! godrics hollow is back! great chapter. You had me sitting at the edge of my seat the hole chapter. Great work!
I\'ll be looking forward to your next chapter, for ever and ever :-)
person Amessis
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, he\'s going to break poor Draco.
person avihenda
schedule April 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, this chapter was really long! I\'ve missed this fic soooo much! *tears of joy*
I\'m so happy I found the hp new archive. They really should say something about it on the main site. I totally missed it for ages and ages.
Great to see you\'re back! If you keep adding chapters, I will keep reading and reviewing :-) allways.
person Amessis
schedule April 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I just wish there was something they could do to get rid of the government- start their own revolution! You can see how Harry is changing with all of this, I worry about all of them.
person Echelon
schedule March 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh! Im loving this story so far and you posted an extra long chapter this time THANK YOU! :p. I really like your style of writing and I cant wait to see how you advance this plot. Oh and can I just say another Thank You for bringing Snape into their household. I usually dont like it when he\'s in HD fics, but he fits so perfectly in this one... Anyway, I hope you update soon, as I can feel the cravings for this story beginning even now :D
person Jesse
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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What a PERFECT chapter! OH MY, you are a genius!! This is one of the best slavery fic EVER!! Please update again soon? I MUST read what happens next! I hope Draco feels this way on the next morning. Hugs!