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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was quite good, actually. I was surprised at how in-character the characters were, after all, it was a very odd situation for them to be in and not many people could keep them so in-character. Your grammar is like a breath of fresh air for me, really, and I applaud the wonderful way this story was portrayed.
Bravo.
Bravo.
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow they are back together! great twist!
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story so far. Are you going to explain about the bracelet Sev wore?
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@woof
I guess this is a browser problem, because I can view the chapters just fine (I've got firefox). Sometimes IE has a problem to load larger pages properly, dependent on the version you run.
I guess this is a browser problem, because I can view the chapters just fine (I've got firefox). Sometimes IE has a problem to load larger pages properly, dependent on the version you run.
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, I love this story. It's pleasantly dark. I'm feeling sorry for Draco though... Update soon, please.
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Several of your chapters are not finished, just cut off in mid-sentence.
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh!!! i hope the new MoM can get draco free! he\'s really in a bad way. poor guy. and poor harry! you know it\'s hard on him too!!
great chapter!!
great chapter!!
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um...I\'m not sure if I liked it...I\'m not a huge fan of the slave theme and it was so dark, I feel like at the end of every chapter I kinda was like,\"This is so weird,\" but I just continued reading anyways, like I had a sort of morbid fascination with this or something...Anyways, it kept me reading and I\'m actually reviewing so I guess it was okay...I\'m just a bit confused now though...Is it finished?? Cause Harry and Draco are still in pretty wonky condition and...and it just seems incomplete...So, it\'s not finished, right?
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May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a very very good story but i don\'t get why draco is soo angry and why is is behaving so agains hARRY
Keep going and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
Keep going and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye