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for The Old Walls Crumble Part 2

by cearrae

person Kazza
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful end for a quite addictive and very enjoyable story. Thank you!
person Kaz
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I adore Chapter 11 - it\'s perfect. This story is definitely a \"keeper\"
person snapescat
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. I like your style of writing
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person Kaz
schedule May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a superb story! Such a believable and original life for Severus. I especially liked the resolution of the Horcrux issue (I won\'t spoil it in the review) and Jenny\'s \'definately not a Mary Sue\' attitude and character. I\'ve greatly enjoyed reading this and I\'m looking forward to the end of the story which will no doubt be wonderfully written (as all this story is well written). Bravo!
person MarzBar
schedule April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the latest. Now that Jenny has retrieved the final horcrux, I hope the wizards are going to find out how to destroy them in time. More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you are building up to the final confrontation and using the viewpoints of Severus and the Muggle, Jenny. It is an unusual point of view since we usually get the Golden Trio\'s outlooks on the war with Moldybutt. More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule April 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good to see this story here. I am enjoying your characters; especially Severus and Lucius plotting against Moldybutt. I hope you give us more story soon.

BTW, I think something is wonky with the posting of Chapter 2 on this site (not the read only).