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for A hidden desire

by jezzi85

person applesauce N soysauce
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well done... liked the hidden desire and the confused emotions that were tied up with past events.
The confession kept you to the end.
Great job!
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was SO VERY HOT! the way Draco described the vibrator was just orgasmic! two thumbs up on hot man porn! i\'m looking forward to reading some of your other stuff! ^__^
person Cassie
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW!!! I loved it! That was some very steamy and sexy writting!!! Job well done!!! I hope to read lots more by you!!! ^__-
person writtenmatrix
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!
person Ternikit
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Harry loves Draco even with all the shit he\'s put him through.
Reading this at 1:00 am, so my typings bad, and my eyes are strained, but I liked it. A lot.
You said it was your first time with something like this?
Well you did a very nice job of it. Draco caring makes me verrrrrrrrrry happy.
You get a cookie for your awesomeness.
schedule April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Just the right mix of smut and fluff.
person Schainsaw
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA! this might as well be the hottest Harry/Draco story i EVER read! you kick ass!
you said you don\'t usually write these kinds of things? well you should!!! THat was so hot i thought i was gonna faint! My god! Draco\'s love confession was so cute! IT was AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY GODZ! *reads it again* KYAAAAAAAAAA! *faints*
person never_knows_best
schedule April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy jebesus!!! you did great, should write like this a little more. fucking fantastic i swear!!!!!
person l\'etje
schedule April 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was very vey hot story so please keep writing and write an othe chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Clover
schedule April 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it :). I think you could defently make it into a cute series, Harry and Draco getting to know each other and having lots of sex . Though it\'s a good a good stand alone as well I just liked it so much I want to read more.