rate_review Reviews

Wow... This is like REALLY good. You should maybe continue or, if you dont wanna continue, just do more stories since your writing is really good. Most Harry/Draco stories seem rushed and the grammer is horrible but you did a really good job. Keep writing! ^_^

I have to agree with Minny. I find it highly doubtful that Harry, while being raped, would suddenly find Malfoy attractive and then fall in love with him. I also think it was a bit rushed, and that you "told" us the story. This does have a great plot background to it, and, like Minny said, there were moments, so good job overall. :)

I like! I like! A bit different from others I've read - your own unique twist. Would like to read more of your stories.

omg that's fucking hot

I really enjoyed this. It was very well written and if you don't normally write like this; then you should write like this more often.

A really great story.

Pern

Damn, that was hot! lol The flow of the scene went really well -- one sexual action to another, and all the descriptions were sensual enough to give the reader a good idea of what the characters were feeling. The dialogue, too, seemed real enough for the reader to connect. At first, when Draco was going back on his aggression, I had doubted the plausibility of it -- but then when Draco explained his actions, it made the plot seem more stable. Although I do find it odd that Draco would have this undying love for Harry (as it is implausible in all stories), I still ship H/D! haha But I think that the direction this story took is more structured and thought-out than most, despite its short length. Most people tend to take Harry and Draco and make them attracted to one another on both a physical and emotional level, the latter being completely implausible (without any sort of development of relationship, that is). But this sows a seed for a relationship without expressing strong sentiment -- after all, the story is based on sexual desires, which, from there, stems a connection between characters; so the relationship part hasn't developed yet, but it's a promising prospect. Harry acts as he would in the books: with sympathy, with compassion, with a helpful nature. As for the writing, your word usage is superb: nothing over the top, but enough to convey a message; the sentences are varied in a way that provides readable vigor; the paragraph lengths vary, too, which gives the piece a sense of control; the five senses are conveyed accordingly; and the length of the writing is perfectly suitable for the budding plot, the flow chaining the events with ease. Overall, really well-written, really well-plotted, and really hot!

I...oh gerds.....I...that was amzinggggggggggg

ugh...you have talent - I really have only read one other story that could be close to this perfection....talent....so much talent...



and sooo much sex........agghhhhh


Amzing....

Oooooooh.....Overall I liked this...Alot, but I do also agree with one of your other reviews by...Minny was it?? Couldn't be bothered to go back and check...Lazy...I really like that Harry and Draco did end up together but I feel that Harry did give in a little too easily...It just felt a bit odd and rushed...Like you didn't really know what to do with that loose end...Ah well your style of writing was awesome...I love this kind of writing...not too wordy and has an excellent flow to it...Much approved =D *nods head*..I'm a bit sad though that it just ended like that...*sniff* Wished that there was a bit more...Your sort-of-plot interested me enough and I'm a sucker for romance between my fave boys so yeah...OH OH What on earth was Draco doing, walking around Hogwarts in the middle of the night with sex-toys?? LOL!! Just something I found really funny!! *winkz*

that was SO hot. the description and everything made it so real, i felt like i should've been writhing along with Harry. FANTASTIC work! you should be incredibly proud!

This story had certainly its moments... however I had some problems to keep on reading in the middle, because rape stories in which the victim suddenly falls in love with the rapist are a major turn off in my opinion.

I kept on reading because of your positive reviews and your writing style and I hoped there would be an happy ending. Sadly, I was dissappointed.

The ending and Dracos explanation are all good and well... but essentially he abused Harry and Harry let him get away with it convincing himself he wanted it. I think Harry has a huge mental problem there, and the outcome will never be a healthy relationship.

That\'s really sad because they could have eventually worked it out if Harry had stood up for himself.

I know this is porn, but I still think the plot is somewhat important... and one should think a bit about the message one gives. Your story essentially told us that rape is okay as long you believe you love the person you rape (how this is possible eludes me)... not only that but you portrayed Harry as the victim every insane rapist would wish, the one who actually likes what\'s done to him. Sorry, I\'m going to be sick now.