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for A hidden desire

by jezzi85

person Anon
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you did grait.I think I reed this on an other side bevore but even knowing what was comming Ihad to read it again.
person momoko
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story, bye
person Kiwi
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this the first story you've written? Because seriously, you are brilliant and I absolutely love your writing style. Will there be more? I really think you should continue because this story definitely has potential, and you can explain and go into Harry/Draco's relationship more in the next chapter. ^_^
Hmmm, to those who said that they thought Harry gave in too easily, etc.. well, I honestly didn't think so because in the end it seemed like Harry's reasoning was justified and it wasn't rape/victim anymore because Harry consented, I mean, Draco even said that he would never hurt Harry, Draco couldn't go through with it without Harry agreeing to it.
At least that's how I viewed it... which is probably what the author wanted to show the readers. =)
Anyway, thank you for writing this amazing story, hope you continue!
person ...
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn!!!!

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that's all i have to say.
person XxBatsxX
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*o* *drools* Is there More?!?!?! That was soooo fucking awsome! >8D
person RYoung
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and arousing, good job.
person Wicabeth
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot >=D Very nice!
person Neko
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing pure and simply amazing I'm I just don't... this brought me places that I... just wow I can't type any more. You my friend should make a career doing this just wow... I bow to you.
person greenwizard
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I liked it. I think you should continue with the relationship thing. You could make it really interesting and have Harry start to like being spanked :)
person Britts
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great little story. I really enjoyed reading it. ^_^ Thank you so much for writing it! Hehe! Until next time!