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for To Covet and Consume

by scullym

person Emylee
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurry and update! It is a great story, super lemons! Update soon! Dont oblivate her, please!
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No oblivate!
person a_reader
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry about your grandmother's passing. You've written a marvelous update, however, and well worth the wait.
person Queen Celestia
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Write more! It's quite intriguing.
person Queen Celestia
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me? Where is the rest? After causing me to laugh myself silly at the fruit description, you are going to leave me hanging until you feel like updating? ;-;
person Flickering_Embers
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You promised to update, where is it?
person Ertia
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sends Excedrin Migraine and a bottle of water* Anything to get the next chapter! PLEASE!! Do not leave us here!

I loved the little bit at the end, that he is niether a creature of light or dark, but somewhere in between. ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh
person June W
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13-14 - thanks for the update, and I hope your headache goes away quickly! Hmm, I suppose Severus is making \"progress\" since he and Hermione are now sharing a light meal, but I wonder what Hermione is thinking of the fruit platter... hmm...
person Lady Catherine Snape
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so good! I read every chapter, and I couldn\'t stop! It was so funny too! I just keep picturing Snape saying these things, and it just makes me laugh! Well, I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!
person Flickering_Embers
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your first chapter is almost on a side that I wouldn\'t read because of the vulgar act of near molestation. But you kept me entrahled beacuse you gave it a two sided twist. Hermione too wanted the act just as much as Snape did. I love also how you manage to make Snape almost, dare I say, fluffy at one point then back to seductive dark king the next. I like your writing style, everything is clearly and smoothly transitioned and the story almost to much to handle at points. You keep in their seats and glued to the screen. Please keep it in Snape\'s view point, I think the whole effect would be ruined if you switched to Hermione\'s veiwpoint.

I look forward to new chapters,
-Embers

P.S. If your beta, Amber, ever goes on or needs a vacation I\'d be happy to fill in. :)