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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thinkit is a good story. I think the only thing that you need though is a BETA. Because the grammer is messed up, but other than that; this is a good story so far. Nice plot.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew when I first started reading this that English probably wasn't your first language... And that I find impressive. Seeing as how English is my first and only language and I still wouldn't be able to put my words together as well as you... My grammar may be more correct, but that's about it. So overall I'm impressed and I like the story so I hope that you are encouraged enough to continue. Thanks :)
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yowsers. me likes!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it's very good. I can't wait for more. Your English is better than a few people I know and they learned it growing up, so I think it's quite an accomplishment to know more than one language. I wish I did, I'm working on one, but it's not there yet. Post soon please!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story, You must must must update soon. Cant wait to read the next chapter!!!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story! I never would have imagined anything like this. Please keep writing and you must tell what is going to happen between the two of them. I think Draco is going literally insane. I think they should both get over any differences and just try and see how a relationship will turn out....but they probably will :). Anyway, great work, keep it up, and please update soon.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story keep up the good work!!!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing