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I actually like your story it

I'm surprised your story has gotton five stars but I've only read the first chapter. Lots of reviewers commented on your grammar and punctuation and that is why I didn't feel the first chapter merited five stars. It's distracting to read with so many mistakes. I will continue with chapter two in hopes that you are following the advice of your reviewers to get a beta. Keep working and best of luck!

More!!!!!!!!!!!

BAD STOPPING POINT! You also have quite a few spelling errors, so you might want to check that. Hurry up and update because as I just said BAD STOPPING POINT!

ur mean tto just stop like that lol well i hope u update really soonn

ohhhhhhh NO! Dont stop it here! update soon...

hey there - i just wanted to say that im really enjoying your story and that i hope you will continue it . . after reading your author notes i just wanted to say that people should understand that fanfiction is harder to do in english if its not your first lanuage and i just wanted to say that you, and everyone that posts fanfiction is brave in the first place for posting them - cuz believe it or not they are a lot of lurkers who enjoy them all = ) . . if you need a beta ( im not the best beta out there but i think i could suffice ) ill be happy to try and help you, just leave a note and i can give u an e-mail address . . but anyways, i hope we get some hot draco/hermione smut lol and again, i like your story and hope for more = )

It sounds like you're off to a good start but its hard to read your formating I get confused. Keep going though because this is gonna get REAL good.

That was pretty good. Update soon.

Much better now with the capitalization. Especially for non-English readers.
Very intriguing story, already several chapters and I still don't know where it'll lead. Keep going.