rate_review Reviews

This was beautiful!!! well done!!!!

please hurry and write more! really good

WOW! That's all I have to say. This story is almost good as the real deal itself! Keep going! Please!

oooooo. . . i would love to b possessivly kissed by Draco!!! LOL!! i am a new huge fan of ur story!!!! update asap

Arrrgh! You cannot stop un a moment like that!!!!
it should be illegal!!!!

Pleeeease, update soon!!!

some college, i forget which one, put out a study a few years back that stated even if grammar and spelling errors are present, the eye is able to make out the word and the mind is able to grasp the understanding of the sentence. I feel that in this story that is the case. Since errors were pointed out, your eyes are now looking for the mistake. focus on the content rather than the mistakes, the story is interesting and if you dont like the writing, then dont read it. and seriously, are capital letters real all that important>? if there is a period you know its the end of a sentence and the start of a new. if you are seriously bothered so much, proof read for the author so there will be no further complaint.
on a different note, good story! keep up the good work!

cant wait for another update!!

love the story. keep it going!!!

it is perfect.. continueeeeeeeeee

Although there are small errors, I willingly excuse them all for two reasons, 1) English is a second language for you, and I have struggled to use another language every day very frustratingly, and 2) your Draco is hot as hell. Keep up the good work.